Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze

Name: Jet Fireneze

Service Tag: 09

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Height: 6'7

Appearance:
Helmet: Recon; Green
Body: Kantana; Green
Shoulders: Security; blue Cobalt
Personality: Outgoing

Level/Rank: UNSC Spartan-Captain



Background: Born in a UNSC Artic camp with spartan-024. Wasnt always the best but had a few skills. He was pretty smart and was the expert at computers. But he was never really as good as Dragon. At the age of 13 he went into captain training and became one in a year. (EDIT)He always enjoyed being on ships. Whenever he got the chance, he would board a ship. Sometimes he would drive around in a borrowed Hawk. Jet loves running. He was never the best but he was good.He always walked around seeming to do nothing. He liked to wander around because well, you never know when you might find something out.

APPROVED!!! Even though you didnt do the last par. Sometimes people dont complete it so dont worry.

Wait a second. I don't like being the bad moderator here, but your bio needs to be a little bit longer. Maybe a paragraph or two will do, In order to get anywhere here, I need to see that you can create a well thought out description that can make the site members visualize your character. Other than the bio though, great job.

I guess your right. Its not approved till you have 1 paragraph done and ready.

Yes, I am afraid you need much more detail on your character. The stories are about the warriors of the Human-Covenant War, so each one should be unique and detailed

Some more details would be very appreciated. You can look at ours for some inspiration and as examples.

Ok it looks like he fixed his background. Approved.