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Spartan-09
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Join date : 2011-06-17

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Primary Weapon: UNSC- M392 Designated Marksman Rifle
Secondary Weapon: UNSC-M7/Caseless SMG
Armor: Spartan- Mark VI

PostSubject: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:13 am

Name: Jet Fireneze

Service Tag: 09

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Height: 6'7

Appearance:
Helmet: Recon; Green
Body: Kantana; Green
Shoulders: Security; blue Cobalt
Personality: Outgoing

Level/Rank: UNSC Spartan-Captain



Background: Born in a UNSC Artic camp with spartan-024. Wasnt always the best but had a few skills. He was pretty smart and was the expert at computers. But he was never really as good as Dragon. At the age of 13 he went into captain training and became one in a year. (EDIT)He always enjoyed being on ships. Whenever he got the chance, he would board a ship. Sometimes he would drive around in a borrowed Hawk. Jet loves running. He was never the best but he was good.He always walked around seeming to do nothing. He liked to wander around because well, you never know when you might find something out.
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Spartan-024
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Posts : 289
Join date : 2011-05-16
Age : 22
Location : On the Red Shadow

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Primary Weapon: UNSC-MA37 Assault Rifle
Secondary Weapon: UNSC- M6 Grindel/Galilean Nonlinear Rifle (Spartan Laser)
Armor: Spartan- Mark VI

PostSubject: Re: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:15 am

APPROVED!!! Even though you didnt do the last par. Sometimes people dont complete it so dont worry.

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Posts : 144
Join date : 2011-05-22
Age : 20
Location : Earth

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Primary Weapon: UNSC- M392 Designated Marksman Rifle
Secondary Weapon: UNSC-M7/Caseless SMG
Armor: Spartan- Recon

PostSubject: Re: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:28 am

Wait a second. I don't like being the bad moderator here, but your bio needs to be a little bit longer. Maybe a paragraph or two will do, In order to get anywhere here, I need to see that you can create a well thought out description that can make the site members visualize your character. Other than the bio though, great job.

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Join date : 2011-05-16
Age : 22
Location : On the Red Shadow

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Primary Weapon: UNSC-MA37 Assault Rifle
Secondary Weapon: UNSC- M6 Grindel/Galilean Nonlinear Rifle (Spartan Laser)
Armor: Spartan- Mark VI

PostSubject: Re: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:38 am

I guess your right. Its not approved till you have 1 paragraph done and ready.

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Join date : 2011-05-11
Age : 24
Location : 'Light of Honor'

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Secondary Weapon: Covenant- T51 DER/I (Plasma Repeater)
Armor: Sangheili- General Harness

PostSubject: Re: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sat Jun 18, 2011 12:36 pm

Yes, I am afraid you need much more detail on your character. The stories are about the warriors of the Human-Covenant War, so each one should be unique and detailed

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Join date : 2011-06-08
Age : 23
Location : Battleship Control Center

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Primary Weapon: Covenant- T33 LAAW (Fuel Rod Cannon)
Secondary Weapon: Covenant- T1 Energy Weapon/Sword
Armor: Sangheili- Field Marshall Harness

PostSubject: Re: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sat Jun 18, 2011 12:45 pm

Some more details would be very appreciated. You can look at ours for some inspiration and as examples.
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Join date : 2011-05-16
Age : 22
Location : On the Red Shadow

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Primary Weapon: UNSC-MA37 Assault Rifle
Secondary Weapon: UNSC- M6 Grindel/Galilean Nonlinear Rifle (Spartan Laser)
Armor: Spartan- Mark VI

PostSubject: Re: Spartan-09 Jet Fireneze   Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:51 am

Ok it looks like he fixed his background. Approved.

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