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PostSubject: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:13 pm

Basic chasis. Extras- turret on huge cannons. Warthog and Monggose on deck. Extra turrets. Sheild prototype. Carries two Single Occupant Exoatmospheric Insertion Vehicles.And a somewhat faster speed that other Behemoths.

BackGround- Dragon was running. He was running from 3 Banshees 4 Ghosts and 5 Spectres. The only safe thing in range was his Behemoth. He hopped in the cannon and took out the Spectres. While the cannons reloaded Dragon manned the turrets and took out the Ghost's drivers. Dragon then got in his Single Occupant Exoatmospheric Insertion Vehicle, and he took of. Dragon ejected from the pod and landed on a Banshee. He killed the driver and did the same with the rest. Then seventeen elites showed up. Dragon ran back to the Behemoth and fired the turrets, they were missing. Dragon turned on the motor and drove the behemoth away at top speed. Then he stopped and fired two cannons shots. Two more elites. Dragon got on the turret and killed them.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:20 pm

Pretty neat, but needs some meat on the bones, you know what I mean?
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:59 pm

I agree with Arlinus. Add some meat to it and I'll definitely approve it. Hey, maybe you can take me for a ride on that thing one day. XD

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:08 pm

Not if I blow it up first.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:02 am

I have no idea what you guys mean by "meat on the bones"

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Tue Jun 28, 2011 6:59 am

By "meat on the bones", we mean that you need to add more to the description. Is that more clear?

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Behemoth-class Troop Transport   Tue Jun 28, 2011 12:36 pm

Exactly. The skeleton needs more meat for it to be strong.
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